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Thursday 25 August 2016

Cheering On (My Writing)

This is my writing that I have done about an Olympic Athlete (don't know if he is one). Read my story really carefully and see if there is any mistake that I have done, if there are any mistakes please comment so when I write a story, recount or a narrative I'll remember to use your comments to help my writing better. Have a good day and I hope you enjoy.
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Cheering On
At Brazil, Rio de Janeiro (where the Olympic games is held), 5:00 am John’s alarm clock rang repeatedly.  John finally rolled out of his comfortable bed to get ready for his big, first and last boxing game at 5:45 am.  It was 5:30 am, John just finished his light healthy breakfast, got dressed into his uniform.  Now all he needs to do is to go to his game as soon as possible because he was running late.  


Ding Ding Ding! The bell has rang. That means that the boxing game is about to start, but not yet.  The crowd was cheering so loud you couldn’t even hear the referee call out the two players. As the referee told the two competitors to come inside the boxing ring, Luke and John were warming up for their game.


“Welcome everybody to the Rio Olympics- Boxing game, tonight we have Luke from Germany playing against John from France!” Shouted the referee, on the microphone. Now the boxing game just begun, Luke started off with an uppercut to John’s chin which kind of clicked a little and then John fell backwards and knocked his head on the referee’s feet (the referee didn’t mind).  “Yay!” Everybody screaming and shouting for Luke, so John got back up with fierce on his face and he started giving Luke four hard jabs straight in the cheek bones and then with a hook, cross into Luke’s munted face.    

There was silence for 5 seconds (because everybody was blown away by John’s actions) and then every single body in the stadium all cheered and jumped up and down for John because he had won the boxing match for the morning. John received a gold medal after his game and he was so stoked, he couldn’t wait to go back to his home country and show his family and friends his first ever gold medal that he won at the Rio Olympics 2016.

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