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Monday 13 June 2016

My Narrative Writing



This is my Narrative Writing of my Busy Fun Saturday just last week. I hope that you will enjoy my narrative writing and not think of it as a boring dumb narrative writing. Thank you if you like it and enjoyed it. Have a good day and Goodbye.

Busy Fun Saturday

On Saturday morning my grandpa (Lokiuti) woke me up I was so tired and lazy that I didn’t want to do anything, but sleep in. My grandpa had to wake me up so that me, him and my aunty (Fiona) can go to Glen Innes to buy a big bag of potatoes and to get some things payed off and also to get something to eat for breakfast.

After when we bought the bag of potatoes aunty Fiona had some money from somewhere and she shouted us KFC for breakfast. KFC isn’t healthy and good to eat for breakfast, but I still ate it anyways because I was desperately hungry and there was nothing else to eat. We parked outside of the KFC shop and just digged into the KFC like we haven’t ate a single piece of it in our whole entire life. It was delightful and it made me full like a fat pig.

Later on Fiona told me that we were going to watch her nephew (Hopoate) play Rugby at his school field. He and his team were playing against Wesley College. Hopoate is now a year 9 at Tamaki College. When my grandpa dropped us off, we saw that everybody was leaving and the reason was that the Rugby game was finished so yeah. I was laughing a little bit and also Tamaki College had won their Rugby game so that is good and awesome.

The Rugby game was finished, but Hopoate and his team were just doing a little run together and just packing up to go to the Glen Innes Pools and have a feed there. Fiona was just standing there talking to her aunty and sister while I was playing with Hopoate’s brothers ridgeback black puppy and Hopoate’s sister Ana and brother Christian.

My Saturday goes on and on and I don’t want to tell you everything that happened because then it will be boring and lame and you won’t like my narrative writing. My favourite part of the day was when me, Fiona, Fiona’s aunty (Ane Lahi), Ane lahi’s daughter Vea, Ana and Ana’s brother Christian went to Noel Leeming to sign up for Fiona’s new Samsung Galaxy S7 phone and us children were just on the phones, Ipad, Laptops and big huge Imacs playing around on it and that’s why that was the best part of my Busy Fun Saturday. THE END...

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