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Monday 15 April 2013

Omaru River Narrative


Once upon a time there lived a eel named Smith. He lived with his sister emma  and father john, mother kate they were living in this wonderful place  called Omaru  River.Him and his sister was racing up and down the river as they were racing they saw evil eels coming like they own the place but they didn’t. when the evil eels said to them if you don’t give us some food we will distroy  your place and pollute the Omaru creek.





The next day Smith woke up with an idea that they could go and find everybody else  or before the evil eels were going to come. After that he got everybody to come and he said to everyone can you please help us because the evil eels are soon coming tonight and going to smash up all the houses in the villige. But then they had another idea that they go and look for some food under the water and some at the edge. When they were tired emma heard a sound and she thought it was the evil eels again but then it was them so when they saw one huge pile of food for them to eat and they were amazed from the food they told them to get but then the evil eels felt so sorry for them because now Smith and his family had no food to eat either. Later john said how about we share half and you guys get half too.THE END...    


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