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Wednesday 17 April 2013

Puppy Reflection


Once upon a time there was a little puppy called Perry.He was a small kind black and brown dots and he loves playing in the ugly garden.



One day Perry knew that his owner had disappeared for a holiday.When he needed  a new owner and some food  he  found a girl named katty  and has lots of food.


Perry was  unhappy that he lost  his lucky bone in the garden so katty the new owner found his lucky bone and then they came best friend forever.

1 comment:

  1. Great writing Jessica. I liked how you had all three parts of an orientation. We will continue to work on adding more detail with your sentences.

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